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Bad News Correspondence Email

Subject Line: My proposal for the JW Marriott was not chosen as a finalist. 

 

Dear MieYoung:

After careful consideration, the JW Marriott has not been chosen as a finalist for the IUPUI Recommendation Report. Thank you for your openness to being a part of this project and for dedicating time to work with me.

 

The Voting Process

With the information from our meeting, I created a visual presentation to share with my class about the main topics we would be working on for the JW Marriott. How the finalists were chosen is explained below:

  • Everyone gave a 90-second pitch about the company they were representing

  • Each student voted on their top 3 picks

  • From the 24 proposals, the 5 companies with the most votes were chosen as finalists

 

From this process, 24 more students know about the employment opportunities the JW Marriott provides. I have also attached the visual presentation I created for the pitch below if you would like to use it.

 

Future Involvement

If you are still interested in being a part of this report, this process repeats every semester and you can reach out to future classes and show your interest. If you would like to get in contact with the course professor, Debbie Oesch-Minor, about future involvement you can email her at djoeschm@iu.edu

 

I want to thank you again for your willingness to be a part of this project and for taking time out of your busy schedule to meet with me. I hope to work with you again in the future and if you have any questions feel free to email me. 

 

Warm Regards,

Dana Reed

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